Showing posts with label fiction books. Show all posts
Showing posts with label fiction books. Show all posts

Tuesday, 13 November 2012

Chpt. 16 - Don't Shoot the Messenger (online book by Daniel Grant Newton)

Stylised photo of Don't Shoot the Messenger
For the previous chapters of Daniel Grant Newton's online book Don't Shoot the Messenger, click below:

Chapter 1      Chapter 2      Chapter 3      Chapter 4      Chapter 5      Chapter 6      Chapter 7      Chapter 8      Chapter 9      Chapter 10     Chapter 11      Chapter 12      Chapter 13      Chapter 14     
Chapter 15

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Hey Shambhala Heroes!  Can you do something for me?  As you no doubt know, I am giving Don't Shoot the Messenger to you for free because I think it is a great story (bias I know!) that some people out there would love.  Thing is, I am not sure who they are - well, there's YOU... and my mum, Anabel, my coolest friends that I met in Vietnam, the readers who have written to me, and David Hasselhoff, but that's all I know for sure...  So if you know anyone who would like this book, please send them the trailer or the first chapter.  After all, a great story is only great when it is read - and your support will definitely encourage me to share more stories with you.  Thanks in advance, and I hope you continue enjoy reading it (and keep sending me those lovely messages)!  :-)
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“Who are you?  And what do you want?” Irene hissed in Hebrew at the man in blue.  She was bound with rope, and sitting against the wall inside a cave on a high hill.
The man was kneeling at the entry to the cave, near his tied up horse, stoking a fire.
As she spoke, he glanced back at her with amber eyes that reflected the kindling flames, but did not answer her.
She repeated her questions in Aramaic, then Latin and Greek.  Still he did not answer.  Just chuckled softly.
“You can either release me, or someone I know will come and really make you pay,” she growled in Hebrew.
Once again he glanced at her, and once again he simply sniggered.
“I know you can understand me,” she continued, “and you don't want to mess with this man who is coming for me.  And now that the sun is coming up you won't have any shadows to slink into.”
“I know the man you talk about,” said the man in Aramaic.  “He is one of the men with strange weapons who have taken a keen interest in the teacher in the village.”  The man paused, before adding:  “But he will not find me.  By the time he comes looking for me, I will be gone.”
“What do you want with me?” Irene asked.  “He can pay you very well for my release.”
Even though the doctor could not see much of the man-in-blue's face, she could tell by the crinkling at the corners of his eyes that he was enjoying her threats.
“He could not pay me or my men enough,” said the bandit.
“I see you have a Roman sword, do they pay you?  How much do you want for my release?”
He stood up and strolled towards her.  The man then produced a blue scarf and bound her mouth with it.
“This shall keep your pretty little mouth quiet,” he laughed, before returning to his fire.
He moved past her into the cave, and returned with a bowl of dates and a dead fowl.
Her belly rumbled and her eyes followed the fowl being put over the fire.
Noticing her attention, the bandit smiled.  “This food is for you, not me.  I will make life as pleasant as possible before they come for you.”
After roasting the fowl, he placed the bowl of dates, a wooden bowl of water and the cooked meat by her side and sat before her.  He then unbound her mouth.
“That is so you can eat,” he explained, moving his hands away to avoid her snapping at him.
“Can you unbind me so I can eat?” she replied.
“If I did that, then I'm sure you would try to escape, and I may kill you,” he said flatly.
“What if I said that I wouldn't?”  Irene lowered her gaze and raised her eyebrows.  “Or are you the sick type of bandit who would take advantage of my position, and enjoy feeding me by hand?”
The man sighed, and leaned around Irene to untie the knot.  She could feel his breath on her back.
As soon as her hands were free she shoved him off her and drew his sword from its scarab.  She held it at him.
“Get back or I'll kill you,” her shaky voice warned.
“You are so predictable,” he growled before launching himself at her.
They rolled on the floor, both struggling to get a hold of the sword.  He pinned her and the sword down on the cave floor and stared into her eyes.
Irene scowled at the man in blue, before kneeing him in the crutch and pushing him off her.  He watched her sprint out of the cave.
But before the dust she kicked up could settle, she hurried back in.
“We've got to get out of here,” she screamed at the man.  “The men with 'the strange weapons' are coming.”
The man picked himself up off the ground and dusted himself off.  “I know, I saw them coming.  That is why I didn't bother chase after you.”
“We got to go,” she said, pulling at his sleeves, “you don't understand how dangerous they are.”
“Very dangerous, I hope,” the man replied.  “I would not like to see your beautiful looks go to waste.”
Irene stared at the man for a second, before trying to run further into the cave.  The bandit however grabbed her and held her tight.
The light at the end of the tunnel was blocked by the shadows of six men.  These men ducked their heads and made their way into the cave.
It was the soldiers minus Zhang (and Jude).
Spider carried two suit cases and placed them on the floor.  He unclipped them and waved a hand over the contents inside.
One suitcase displayed two rows of grenades, and one row of chemical gas canisters.  The other suitcase was filled with bullets.
Spider then motioned towards five rifles and a pile of C4 now leaning up against the cave wall.
“What on earth are you doing, Spider?” spat Irene.
“I am swapping you for a few toys,” the tall Brit responded.  “Alexander was well aware that Jude and you may not follow orders.  It was a possibility in the holographic matrix.”
The bandit pushed Irene into Spiders arms, and the big man led her out with a pistol to her back.  “So he had me bring a note to give to this man.  The 'man in blue', the Robin Hood of the Roman Empire.  If anything was to go wrong, I would deliver this letter to his associates, show them our weapons, and meet him here to swap some excess weaponry for you.”
Spider led Irene down the hill with his five comrades flanking him.
“You swapped technology that is two thousand years more advanced for Jude and myself.”
“No, just you,” Spider grinned.  “The matrix showed us that he would help you escape, and try to stop us by himself like the hero he thinks he is.
"And capturing you was always going to be a problem.  We knew he would be able to get you past us, evasion is a specialty of his.  However, the 'man-in-blue' is one of the best guerrilla fighters in this area.  In this time, he is as much a legend as he is a man.  The matrix indicated he would get you where we would have failed.”
“I don't understand,” Irene muttered.  “What do you want with me, anyway?”
“You are bait for Mr. Stone.  He is a difficult fish to catch, but use someone he cares about, and he loses perspective and takes stupid risks.  It is a weakness he recognises and tries to guard himself against.”
Spider chuckled.  "That was your main purpose for coming along.  Sure, your know-how was integral and much appreciated, but getting Jude 'Stone-Heart' Stone to care about somebody, that was tricky.  The matrix indicated we had to get someone halfway around the world for that."
There was a silence as they moved down the hill and towards the village.
“Look, you can't just give someone advanced weapons like this, Spider,” protested Irene, breaking the silence.  “Killing Jesus is one thing, but giving a man like this that kind of weaponry is insane.  You have no idea what repercussions it could have.”
“We do actually,” Spider grinned.  “Jude is a great soldier and a great strategist, but he is very erratic.  We have to keep him out of the loop sometimes, and we had to keep you out of the loop, too, of course.  But that doesn't mean this wasn't also part of the original plan.
“You see, by giving this rebel group a few guns and bombs, the Roman Catholic Church, or any derivative of it, will never eventuate.  It is literally saving the mental enslavement of billions of people, and put the progress of the world hundreds or thousands of years ahead.
“As you said, it wasn't Jesus who wanted the church and organised religion.  So cutting out his tongue would simply stop Christianity, but another much more violent Abrahamic church would rise in its place.  You need to cut the weed at the roots.”
“So what if you didn't kill Jesus, but destroyed the church?”
“If that were to happen, then, although there would be only small pockets of it, Christianity would still exist.  And the possibilities for such a church rising up could come about in the future.  So it is important he is dead, but it is by no means the main game.”  Spider smirked.  “We have thought of everything, doctor.”
“Who do you mean by we?  I can't imagine anyone on the research team to recommend this extreme cause of action.  I know each member, most on a personal level, and none of them are this crazy,” exclaimed Irene.
“You are right,” said Spider, now leading Irene up the stairs of the village's temple.  “This further research was done by Alexander and me.  Scientists don't have the balls to make decisions like this.”
Irene struggled to break free, but Spider held strong.  One of the soldiers came to Irene with a needle and injected it into her neck.  After a few moments of struggle she slumped into the soldier's arms.
“Take her to the chamber and set the bomb to go off just before Yēšûă speaks,” said Spider, handing her limp body to Chernova.  “We don't want him to try to stop us killing Yēšûă before the fireworks.”
Click here for the heart-pounding, action-packed Chapter 17 ... also, don't forget to let your friends and family know about this book, and of course, check out my book The Last King of Shambhala at your favourite online book store.

Friday, 7 September 2012

Chpt. 4 - Don't Shoot the Messenger


Irene pressed the folders and files Alexander had given her to her chest, eyes down at her feet as she scuttled through the corridors towards the briefing room, all the while berating herself for the choice she was about to make.
As she turned the corner, she crashed into someone coming equally fast in the opposite direction, spilling all the folders and files across the floor.  Irene’s line of vision shot up and she caught her breath.
That someone was Jude Stone, the leader of the field team.
“Next time watch where you are going, soldier, and don’t…” she muttered to herself, swallowing hard, her deep brown eyes flicking between his eyes and the files splayed out on the polished timber.
He glared at her, looking her up and down with contempt.
“I guess we both weren't looking where we were going.  Too preoccupied with our thoughts, hey?”  She shone a quick, polite smile before bending down to pick up her files.
Jude Stone didn't respond.  Instead he just peered at her, chewing his gum rhythmically, before pushing past and continuing on his way.
She glanced back at him as he made his way in the opposite direction.
“Idiot,” she muttered under her breath.
Irene picked up her papers and files, and made her way to the briefing room.  As she walked into the small office, one of the security personnel closed and locked the door behind her.
Inside was a solid-wood oval table with Alexander and seven of the soldiers she saw yesterday seated around it.  There were two spare seats.
Irene searched the stone faces of the soldiers.  Jude was the only team member missing.
“Sit anywhere you like,” Alexander sighed, gesturing to the two spare seats.  “I was just introducing you to the team.”
There was a silence, so Alexander spoke again.  “This is the team bar the almighty leader, Mr. Stone, who had to rush out and tend to something.  Do not worry, doctor, he will still be on the mission.”
“I think he didn't like the fact you recruited someone without our okay, Lord Cartwright,” chuckled Spider.  “Especially appointing someone who's not even part of the forces.”
Irene sat on the seat at the end of the table and opened a folder.  Her ears burned.  She took a few deep breaths, and then focused on sifting through her prepared documents with quivering hands.
“In the next mission, you will be very thankful for Doctor Hadar and her expertise,” Alexander swallowed.  “I do not think Mr. Stone understands how respected a researcher she is in her field.  He would treat her much differently if he did.”
Spider leaned forward and pointed a finger at Alexander.  “I don't think you understand what it's like in our field.  Each one of these boys brings something to the table we actually need in completing a mission.  And we rely on each of these parts to keep us alive. 
“This woman is not just going to hold us back, her lack of training, Lord Cartwright, will put each member at risk.  That's why Jude stormed out.  No offence, doctor, but one wrong step and someone could die.”
“Excuse me gentlemen, perhaps I can introduce myself as Lord Cartwright had previously offered.  It is probably appropriate given the partnership we find ourselves in, although I do condition that formality by saying I wish not to form any real relationships with any of you, and have no intention of winning the respect of the ‘boys' club’.  I'll leave that to the yard spitters and booze guzzlers,” Irene interrupted, looking at the two men in between setting out documents on the desk.  “My not wanting to socialise with you all is no  reflection on any of your individual characters, which I am sure sparkle like diamonds and drip with charm.  It is, in truth, rather an unfortunate bias formed by the aggregation of military personnel I have previously encountered.  And had the misfortune to tolerate the company of.  An unfounded bias, no doubt, but a bias all the same.
The men glared back at her in varied states of confusion.
“My name is Doctor Irene Hadar.  The letters after my name won't mean anything to you, as a soldier ... just as the lettered agencies you served under mean nothing to me ... so I'll get straight on to why I am here.  Your next mission is to go back to the year 31 A.D., in what is now modern-day Palestine.  I believe many of you have been posted there before in more modern times.
“There your task will be to take out a revolutionary connected with the Zealots, an underground resistance group.  I believe Mr. Stone was to brief you all, but as he has had some other business to tend to, I'm more than happy to.  It will perhaps be refreshing for you all to have a leader in the field talk to you about your next destination, and I invite you to ask questions regarding the time period at the end if you would like to learn more.
“The revolutionary we are to locate goes by the name of Yēšûă, or what can be anglicised as Joshua. 
"According to the research notes Alexander has provided me, collated by an adequately impressive research team, Yēšûă never raised arms in his time, preferring to travel throughout the region spreading insidious ideas that incited violence and led to countless deaths for centuries to come.  After a failed attempt at killing him by the Roman Empire, he left for Asia and possibly lived out the rest of his life in Kashmir, India. 
"Yēšûă must not be killed in public view as this will create a martyr, which will only fan the fire of his words.  In fact, he may well wish to be made a martyr.”
“Sounds like a standard job for us, babe,” sniggered a marine with a bent nose and bushy eyebrows.  “We don't need any textbooks to tell us how to make someone disappear without a trace.”
“If you did, I wouldn't expect any of you would be here.”  She smiled, satisfied the backhanded compliment would be lost on the men.
“The difficulty with taking out Yēšûă is that his group stay underground most of the time,” continued Irene.  “The only time he can usually be found is during his public lectures when he comes to a town.  These are kept secret until the last moment, as he had a significant amount of Roman gold coins on his head.
“And it seems he used a myriad of underground passages and supporters in every village who helped hide and protect him.
“There is not much accurate information regarding his whereabouts at any point in history, however the researchers have narrowed down one window of opportunity.  A location and time period with an 84% historical probability.”
“Can't that hologram web tell us where he is?” asked Spider.
“Despite Alexander's confidence in his new toy, I spoke with the research team and they revealed they couldn't fully harness its power yet.  They can access likely probabilities, but nothing they glean is 100% foolproof.
“On top of that, they tell me you only have one opportunity.  Once you travel to a specific timeSpider glanced about the room and sniggered.  "Thanks for the history lesson, Doc, but we'll do better without you.  Believe it or not, accomplishing a mission like this needs a lot of high-level training."
Doctor Hadar paused and handed out pages with the basic elements of the mission.  “If you want someone to help you track down a man who will be harder to find than Osama bin Laden and Where's Wally's adopted love child, you might want someone who knows the terrain, knows the customs, and can speak Aramaic, Hebrew, Greek and Latin.  It's your choice, Spider.  Just say the word and I'll get back on my plane out of here, and leave the babysitting of marines to somebody else.  I have a very important dig on the other side of the planet that I'm happy to go back to.”
Everyone looked at Spider.
“You are a feisty one, aren't you?"  He smiled.  "I guess it's up to me then, since that pretty boy Jude ain't here,” he added.  He looked at the document Irene had handed him.  “He ain't going to be happy about it, but I guess we could do with more intel than a few bullet points on a page.  Just do as we say or you'll end up dead.”

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Monday, 27 February 2012

The Publishing Iceberg ... Never Trust a Creative with a Timeline

"So when can we buy your book?"

July 2011

November 2011

January 2012

February 2012

March 2012

My book is finally ready for online publishing, my dear and patient friends.  

Despite a number of false starts, and a book trailer that has been watched by 885 people (as of today) that states it will be ready for purchase eight months ago.

And of course, when I say finally ready, I mean it will be available to purchase in the next 14 days ... it has been written, has had numerous edits (by myself and others), has a cover (as seen above), has a theme song, and has even more book trailers... something tells me I just like making book trailers.

Naturally, now I have to think about such things like a website, a Facebook page, and how to take it from one in a million books, to THE one in a million book.  I came up with that just as I write.  Thanks.  I know.  Brilliant, right?

So when I said last week this is when my journey starts, what I REALLY meant to say is THIS is where my journey starts.

Publishing Iceberg.
But I guess the lesson here is that it takes much, much longer than you expect to get a project off the ground like this - ESPECIALLY when you're taking the world on yourself, and not got a whole paid publishing and marketing team behind you.  There are just so many things to do in the unseen (FYI self-publishers).

My publishing team is me.  And my marketing team is my readers who are obsessed with like my book and tell others about it.  (Kind of like my blog.)

(And creatives are, well, creative with expected timelines, too.  That's why publishers set the release dates and not authors, I guess.)

Anyway, I am just so so so excited about the release, I thought I'd drop you a line.

Oh, and by the way, if you like my book cover above, check out the graphic designing team that created it and their 'off-the-chart' creativity at: www.neverlandstudio.com.au